Thursday 18 July 2013

Poem: My lost love

Restless in bed and sleepless through the night
I longed for my lover,
I wanted him desperately, his absence was painful,
I was missing the way his arms go round my body
The scent of his body, the rise & fall of chest as he lies beside me,
I couldn’t take it anymore,
So I got up, went out and roved the city,
Hunting the street and down the alley
I wanted my lover in the worst ways
I looked high and low but I couldn’t find him
The night watchman found me as they patrolled the dark city
“Have you seen my dear lost love?” I asked
No sooner have I left them, I found him
I have found my dear lost love!
My heart raced with emotions.
Feeling elated, ecstatic and extremely overjoyed
I threw my arms around him and held him tight,
He held me tight,
I have missed him madly,
I wouldn’t let him go,
I have to take him home
Home to a warm house, a warm dinner and a warm bed.


2 comments:

  1. The story line is captivating and heart touching, I love how each line of the poem makes the reader want to read more and also read btw the lines and even attempt to substitute himself for the other character which is the lost love..... (keep it up)

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  2. it is a nice poem, though i find it to be a bit bland, i feel it lacks suspense and mystery.
    But what it lacks in the aforementioned it makes up in clarity, so it's fine.

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